Very catchy.
Its a good one to listen to a few times. I bob my head to the pace and enjoy the melody... although it (the melody) is a bit quiet. Could use some work on mastering... it seems to peak a lot, and some parts sound lost in the background. Id say job well done for the most part... I just think you should get those melodies out front. Good feel. Keep it up.
You're right ,some others people told me the same thing . I'm gonna fix it on my other songs!
Needs tweaks.
The bass melody is rather loud and up front. The rest of the song is way too toned down and in the rear. The beat isnt bad, and the melody is cool enough. The biggest issue here is just adjusting levels to make everything mesh better.
Also... curriemaster says "this reminded me a lot of LTJ Bukem". I must say I dont hear this at all. Im a big bukem fan. This track reminds me a lot of the goldeneye game music.
Not bad work.
Very pretty.
Ive never heard the original tune... so I dont know how much of a difference this remix is an example of . It is very very pretty. A good piece of music. Worth a listen or two.
yay im happy you liked it. well its a lot of difference between the original and this remix
Very well done...
This is indeed the opposite of most mainstream DnB. It has a distinct style and is very precicely composed. Personaly I think it lacks flavor and depth to a certain degree... but I base that on personal taste mostly. Its a quality tune.
Indeed, it's not at all mainstream DNB. lacks flavor eh? I'm not sure where, but again those are your personal tastes. Thanks for leaving a generous review and score, very very much appreciated my good man!
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Very familliar, but good.
Certain parts of this track sound very very much so like certain tunes from Good Looking Records. Though this kills your originality score... it is one of my favorite sounds. This peice is very nice to listen to repeatedly. My only problem with it is that the melodies dont progress well together. It seems somewhat inconsistant and a bit chopped.
Dont get me wrong... this is beautiful work. I hope to hear more in the future.
YAY! I got a new review! Next plaese don't use the term "Beautiful"!(yuck!) I hate that word! Just use Viewtiful PLEASE! Anyways I thought people on NG were suppose to rate "Originalty" by genre...OH WELL!
Well dude thanks ALOT for the Viewtiful review dude...hold this song is "Out of Control" Thats why the melodies don't fit dude!(=D) Thats why I named it that man! Well thatks again for the VIEWTIFUL ass review dude!
So Keep it V man!
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Way too simple.
Its way too simple and short. Try putting some more effort into it next time.
Nice beat
I like the beat, but the melody is too simple. Elaborate on the melody some and try different samples. The one used for this doesnt stand out very well and has a humming drone to it.
Keep em coming.
Quality.
Starts off a little slow. Other than that this is beautiful work.
Keep it up.
Very very mechanical
This sounds more like industrial to me. I like the beats a lot and the melody is nice. Though I would have gone another direction with the samples used for the melody. They are rather... uber-electronic.
I know that it's not technically dance, but I know that one can definitely dance to this. Seriously... do the Master Shake.
Nice feel. The title fits.
You have some good simple melodies down that work well for an ambient or naturally repetitive genre like dnb. All I have to say to you is... get more samples and try to steer yourself away from using the simple samples that came with FL. Your percussion is alright but I would just like to hear you mess with some higher quality samples.
Keep it up.
I make breakbeat/drum n bass style music using Fruityloops, Cool Edit, mostly free or custom made samples, and my inability to focus on anything else. I believe in detailed constructive critisism. Advice is infinitly more useful than praise or scorn.
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